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posted by [personal profile] averita at 10:30am on 01/03/2010 under , ,
I prompted [livejournal.com profile] mmegiry with "Richard Adar" and somehow wound up writing that one myself.


She never mourned Richard Adar, not really – she gave herself ten minutes after the initial attacks to cry for everything she’d lost before splashing water on her face and moving on to the next catastrophe.

Occasionally she’ll come across a thumbnail of him in a newspaper and pause, or catch her breath when Billy says something with that look on his face that sends her back twenty years and six campaigns.

“It’s nothing,” she says when he asks her what’s wrong, and can’t stop herself from smoothing his hair back. “You just remind me of someone I used to know.”

And [livejournal.com profile] mmegiry prompted me with "picnic".


Laura used to love planning field trips – she’d take her classes to every museum in Caprica City, to the zoo and the famous aquarium in Ithaca, to galleries and plays and one time a circus. There was something about being outside the classroom that excited her students, put an eager sparkle in their eyes.

She hasn’t seen that sparkle in many years, since well before the attacks, and seeing it now leaves her aching. These kids are happy with dry bread and a slice of soft apple, with fresh air so cold it bites. They’ll never know anything else.
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posted by [identity profile] miabicicletta.livejournal.com at 04:55pm on 01/03/2010
Oh my gosh, these are both so lovely. I especially love the one with Billy (oh, Billy). And the second one is just so brutally cheerless. Laura in teacher mode is a different personality we don't see very often, and I am always interested in her perspective.

Amazing pieces. Thanks so much for sharing!
 
posted by [identity profile] averita.livejournal.com at 07:27pm on 01/03/2010
Thank you so much :) I LOVE teacher Laura. And Billy &heart;
 
posted by [identity profile] murphy987.livejournal.com at 05:08pm on 01/03/2010
Oh, those were absolutely perfect.

Bravo!
 
posted by [identity profile] averita.livejournal.com at 07:27pm on 01/03/2010
Thank you!
 
posted by [identity profile] mmegiry.livejournal.com at 05:32pm on 01/03/2010
Already commented on #1 but Picnic is absolutely gorgeous. You are definitely studying the right subject, bb.
 
posted by [identity profile] averita.livejournal.com at 07:28pm on 01/03/2010
♥ Thanks for the prompt and being awesome.
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posted by [identity profile] averita.livejournal.com at 07:29pm on 01/03/2010
I'm so glad you like that bit! I wish we'd been able to see her deal with the loss a little more but that wouldn't have been very in character - I think this way makes more sense. And yessss, Billy makes everything better.

Thanks for commenting!
 
posted by [identity profile] starbuck92.livejournal.com at 03:19am on 02/03/2010
The picnic one is quite lovely.

Also, your icon is so pretty!
 
posted by [identity profile] averita.livejournal.com at 04:24am on 04/03/2010
Thank you!

I love it :) [livejournal.com profile] prettypinkdork made it!
 
posted by [identity profile] kosmikdawg.livejournal.com at 06:50pm on 02/03/2010
These are wonderful.
Edited Date: 2010-03-02 06:50 pm (UTC)
 
posted by [identity profile] averita.livejournal.com at 04:24am on 04/03/2010
Thanks so much :)

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