http://akachankami.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] akachankami.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] averita 2011-10-08 01:55 pm (UTC)

(*o*) few crushing perfect utterly beautiful words!
thank you for writing this!

They dreamed of a world with wide skies and a quiet lake. He thinks he sees it now, Earth, in the still, dim light and the shadows on her skin. Her body is all flat expanses and sudden, subtle curves; her stomach clenches, plates shifting under a planet’s surface, and he tastes the ocean-salt along the curve of her cheek.
she made him believe in her and her dream of earth, and
i love that you compared her cancer to the nuclear destruction and her body to the wasteland that is earth. and i love even more that he sees it with his heart, like their dream was: beautiful and perfect and lovely ♥
the last sentences are so sad and true and perfect my heart aches!

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