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2011-10-08 02:42 am (UTC)
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This is deep and beautiful and I'm so glad you wrote fic!
Like others, I loved this line:
They don’t talk much, these days, looking to books and the slide of skin to say what needs to be said.
That observation about Dee is something I'd never thought about either--and I like it so much.
And then the way he sees Earth in her and your ending "Earth is a wasteland" really pack such a sad wallop. Nicely done.
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Like others, I loved this line:
They don’t talk much, these days, looking to books and the slide of skin to say what needs to be said.
That observation about Dee is something I'd never thought about either--and I like it so much.
And then the way he sees Earth in her and your ending "Earth is a wasteland" really pack such a sad wallop. Nicely done.